新托福寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和雅思寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)基本相似，在語言上的考察點(diǎn)也很高，所以新托?？荚囋谡Z言上一定要引起高度的重視。詞匯的重要性，包括遣詞和造句兩個(gè)方面。這一系列中，朗閣海外考試研究中心寫作組的專家將為大家介紹其中之二，如何達(dá)到造句的高分。

 

 

1.    句型分析

英語的句型包括以下幾種，簡單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫作中，一般使用復(fù)合句，輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句，當(dāng)然肯定要有簡單句，做到長短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識(shí)并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。

a.                       Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

這句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。

 

b.                       This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

這句話中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中，有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句對(duì)result進(jìn)行解釋說明。

 

c.                       I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

上句話是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子，是一個(gè)并列句；because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。

 

d.                       Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個(gè)句子，成為并列句，再一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

 

2.         有問題的句子的列舉

朗閣海外考試研究中心分析認(rèn)為，考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。

1）.破碎句

所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語（或者說謂語是動(dòng)詞的非謂語形式，如分詞），或者是從句單獨(dú)成句。

破碎句：She singing alone. （無謂語，singing是現(xiàn)在分詞）

正確句：She is singing alone.

 

破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. （從句單獨(dú)成句）

正確句：He did not come because he was sick.

 

2）.接連句

       所謂接連據(jù)，就是兩個(gè)句子直接連在一起，既未使用連詞，也未使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。

接連句:   Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正確句一:      Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正確句二:      Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

 

3）.句子連接不正確

       所謂句子連接不正確，就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子之間以逗號(hào)連接，這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號(hào)、冒號(hào)、句號(hào)等連接兩個(gè)句子。

不正確句:      Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

正確句：       Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.