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雅思大作文范文解析之監(jiān)獄

來源：常州朗閣雅思新托福外語時間：2021-07-06 19:34

雅思考生拿到作文題目都想知道究竟哪種寫作方式比較容易拿到分，有沒有寫作的范本以供學習呢？為此，常州朗閣雅思培訓名師為此特意撰寫了這篇文章，希望對學生們有所幫助。

Question: In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

解讀：這個題目是問在大多數(shù)，監(jiān)獄是一種更有效的解決犯罪的方法。有些人認為更有效的方法是向那些違反法律的人提供教育，問同意還是不同意。這個題目的難點在于如何區(qū)分兩個對立面。其中一個是監(jiān)獄，這個很多考生都會非常容易理解。而另一個則是提供教育。罪犯不送進監(jiān)獄，而是去接受教育，這個可能很多人還無法完全的理解。因為，目前在大多數(shù)，基本上都是監(jiān)獄的形式來管理罪犯，而并沒有所謂的提供教育來解決罪犯的問題。所以，可能對于考生來說比較有難度，并不是非常容易地回答。這里考生需要明確的是，進行教育的形式和目的是什么。如果考生本身確實覺得教育方面的觀點比較難以進行寫作，可以考慮去從監(jiān)獄的壞處的角度來寫作。這樣一來，就可以更好地將這個話題展開討論。

1st argument:

The ultimate purpose of a prison system is to serve as a deterrent force against the potential wrongdoers by setting out a standard set of guidelines for the public to adhere to/comply with. Without the adequate legal system, there is a good chance that many who harbor ulterior motives may act beyond the moral and legal boundaries and thus hurt, either intentionally or unintentionally, those innocent victims. It is by no means an overstatement that the crime rate is negatively correlated with the strictness of the law enforcement. Therefore, to curb crime rate in the future, the prison still appears the ideal option of treating the criminals.

2nd argument:

Locking up prisoners behind the bars is also intended to restrict their freedom and minimize their contact with the public. If the criminals were allowed to continue to wander around in the city streets, more innocent people would be hurt and victimized. Thus, putting prisoners in jail can spare the public from the greater risks to which they would have otherwise been exposed.

3^rd argument:

The majority of crimes can be attributed to the greed for financial power or the desire to elevate social status. It is understandable that those undereducated ones could hardly land a decent job amidst increasingly fierce competition and thus are forced to resort to illegal activities to scrape a basic living. Even if they are sent to prison to be rehabilitated, they are still confronted with the identical set of issues upon release. Worse yet, their criminal records, which would accompany them forever, would scare away many potential employers. Such strong sense of discrimination and social prejudice against ex-convicts might push them back to the life as criminals again.

思路：

這篇文章主要所支持的方向還是以監(jiān)獄為主。首先，第一個方面是，監(jiān)獄體制的最終目的是通過法律標準的實施，讓公眾有一個可以遵守的一套標準，從而對于大量的潛在的罪犯起到一個很好的抑制的作用。因為，如果沒有相應的法律體制的話，很有可能很多有不良動機的人的行為會超越法律和道德的邊界，從而故意的或者是無意的傷害到那些無辜的受害者。毫無疑問，法律實施的嚴格程度與犯罪率是成反比的。所以，在未來如果要抑制犯罪率的話，最好的方式依然是通過監(jiān)獄。其次，把罪犯關(guān)押起來能夠很好地限制他們的自由，并且減少他們與大眾的接觸。如果罪犯依然可以在城市街道游蕩，更多無辜的人會受到傷害，并且因此成為受害者。所以，把罪犯關(guān)進監(jiān)獄可以保護公眾的安全，減少罪犯對他們所造成的威脅。

反過來，大多數(shù)的犯罪行為可以歸結(jié)于對財富的貪婪或者是對社會地位的提升。不難理解的是，那些沒有接受過良好教育的人在如此激烈的競爭環(huán)境下，很難找到一份不錯的工作。因此，他們被迫要去從事一些非法的行為去維持基本的生計。即使說他們被送進監(jiān)獄去接受改造，他們在釋放的時候仍然會面臨同樣的問題。更糟糕的是，他們的犯罪記錄將會伴隨他們一生。這樣一來，他們會把很多潛在的雇主嚇跑掉。這樣的一種強烈歧視和社會偏見會讓這些有前科的人再次走向犯罪的道路。

Expressions:

1. ultimate 最終的

2. serve as a deterrent force against 作為一種很強的威懾力

3. a set of guidelines 各種各樣的規(guī)章制度

4. adhere to/comply with 遵循，遵守

5. there is a good chance that 很有可能會怎么樣

6. harbor ulterior motives 有不良動機的人

7. beyond the moral and legal boundaries 超越了道德和法律的界限

8. it is by no means an overstatement that 絕不是夸大其詞

9. curb 控制，減少

10. behind the bars 關(guān)在了監(jiān)獄里面

11. wander around 游蕩，閑逛