一、流程圖寫作特點及寫作要點：

很多同學對流程圖產(chǎn)生了十分恐懼的心理，一旦考到流程圖就會抱怨自己的運氣有多糟糕。但事實上，只要把握流程圖寫作的幾大要領(lǐng)，流程圖將不再可怕。以下，寫作組的專家總結(jié)了流程圖寫作的幾個要點供考生參考：

1. 找到流程圖的過程，起點，終點。

2. 找到圖上標出的已知動作，如果出現(xiàn)生詞，盡量猜測。無詞，用自己的語言。

3. 按照步驟，分段描述，千萬不能省略任何一步。

4. 切記!加入流暢合理的表示順序的關(guān)聯(lián)詞。

5. 句型以主動為主，搭配被動，以及主語從句(例如：It can be seen from the graph that…)。

6. 時態(tài)要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。

例文分析：

【高分范文及深度點評】

The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.(所有的小作文第一句話都要用一般現(xiàn)在時。流程圖必備三個詞：process整個過程;stage階段;step步驟)

Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia.(開頭不能一上來就直接介紹cacao tree,而是通過主題詞chocolate引出，否則顯得太唐突)

【流程圖特點之一：介紹過程要使用一般現(xiàn)在時】

【流程圖特點之二：大量使用定語從句，將有關(guān)聯(lián)的兩句話連接?！?/p>

【流程圖特點之三：大量使用被動語態(tài)】The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.

【流程圖特點之四：使用一些表示順序的連接詞】when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.(三個句子的并列：“句子A,句子B and 句子C”。)

During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.

【流程圖特點之五：要適當?shù)靥砑觽€別圖中沒有交代但能從圖片中直接讀出來的一些內(nèi)容，否則可能達不到字數(shù)要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千萬不要加上自己的主觀觀點，否則會扣分】

Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.

After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.

【流程圖特點之六：一般不需要寫總結(jié)】

【滿分范文】

The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.

Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.

Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃ -1300 ℃. This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.

Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.

(215 words)

【考官評語】

Band 9

This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor ‘slips’ can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.

二、雅思流程圖的重點詞匯解析：

表述時間：

in 10 days

during the period of 10 days

The process lasts for up to 10 days

after 10 days

10 days passed until something happened.

表示然后：then, next, in the next state, following that, after that, the next step in the stage is ....

表示過程：process, procedure, formation, development

表示步驟：step, stage, phase

時間階段：after a period of …months/days/minutes, during…

順序連詞：first, first of all, in the first stage, initially, to begin with

second, then, next, also

after that, at the same time, in the meantime, meanwhile

prior to, until

the first stage involves … / in the second stage / in the third stage /

in the last stage / The next step in the stage is that…

目的連詞：in order to / in order that; so as to / so that

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